10月9日outpost firewall pro帮助翻译 管理网络连接部分
6楼的部分有更新的感觉还是翻译的不咋地……
原文:
System Requirements
Outpost Firewall Pro can be installed on Windows 2000 SP4, Windows XP, Windows Server 2003, or Windows Vista operating systems. The minimum system requirements for Outpost Firewall Pro are:
CPU: 450 MHz Intel Pentium or compatible;
Memory: 256 MB;
Hard disk space: 100 MB.
Note:
Outpost Firewall Pro is available both for 32-bit and 64-bit versions of operating systems. Please download the corresponding version from Agnitum's web site.
No special network adapter or modem and no special network configuration settings are needed for the normal operation of the software.
Outpost Firewall Pro should not be run with any other security software. Running Outpost Firewall Pro with other security products can result in system instability (i.e. crashes) and can cause your system to operate in an insecure mode.
翻译:
[font=宋体]系统要求[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Outpost Firewall Pro[/font][font=宋体]可以安装在[/font][font=Times New Roman]Windows 2000 SP4, Windows XP, Windows Server 2003,[/font][font=宋体]或者[/font][font=Times New Roman]windows vista[/font][font=宋体]操作系统上。最低系统配置要求为:[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]CPU: 450 MHz Intel [/font][font=宋体]奔腾处理器或兼容的处理器;[/font]
[font=宋体]内存:[/font][font=Times New Roman]256MB[/font][font=宋体];[/font]
[font=宋体]硬盘空间:[/font][font=Times New Roman]100MB[/font]
[font=宋体]提示:[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Outpost Firewall Pro[/font][font=宋体] 能够适用于[/font][font=Times New Roman]32[/font][font=宋体]位和[/font][font=Times New Roman]64[/font][font=宋体]位操作系统。请在[/font][font=Times New Roman]Agnitum[/font][font=宋体]的网页上下载对应的版本。[/font]
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[font=宋体]该软件在日常使用中([/font][i][b][font=宋体]revised by[/font][size=3][font=宋体] [/font][font=宋体]clemond[/font][/size][/b][/i][font=宋体])不需要特殊的网络适配器和特殊的网络配置。[/font]
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[size=10.5pt]Outpost Firewall Pro[/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt] 不应该和其它安全软件([i][u]应该指的是防火墙revised by [b]volunteer[/b][/u][/i])一起运行。[/size][/font][size=10.5pt]Outpost Firewall Pro[/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]如果和其它安全产品([/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10.5pt][i][u]应该指的是防火墙revised by [b]volunteer[/b][/u][/i][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10.5pt])一同运行可以导致系统不稳定(例如:系统崩溃)并且可能导致您的系统在不安全的模式下运行。[/size][/font]
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[font=宋体][size=10.5pt][u]上句可精简为[/u]:[/size][/font][b][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]Outpost 不可与第三方安全软件同时运行. 否则可能造成系统不稳定 (例如崩溃) 并导致[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]系统在不安全的模式下运行。[/size][/font][/b][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]([/size][/font][i][b][font=宋体]revised by[/font][size=3][font=宋体] [/font][font=宋体]clemond[/font][/size][/b][/i][font=宋体][size=10.5pt])[/size][/font]
[[i] 本帖最后由 hopetobe 于 2008-10-9 22:03 编辑 [/i]] :-),朋友这次翻译的很好哈。
Outpost Firewall Pro should not be run with any other security software. Running Outpost Firewall Pro with other security products can result in system instability (i.e. crashes) and can cause your system to operate in an insecure mode.
我认为官方的意思应该是不要同时安装别的防火墙软件,因为OFP只是防火墙,如果不安装杀毒软件,那到时真的cause your system to operate in an insecure mode.
[:01:] 呵呵,我也觉得是,但是按照原文翻译了,我加个注释,谢了!
回复 3楼 hopetobe 的帖子
大家一起探讨一下,按照原文翻译的确是安全软件的意思(我个人认为安全软件的定义很广泛…… 杀毒软件、防火墙、安全辅助软件(如System Repair Engineer )等等都可以称之为安全软件) 我觉得很有可能是OSS和OFP防火墙部分用的是同一种帮助文档,只是替换了一下关键词,其实我觉得安全软件指防火墙应该没错……outpost firewall pro帮助文档介绍部分3
原文:Registering Outpost Firewall Pro
Outpost Firewall Pro is available for your free evaluation. You are entitled to evaluate the software during the trial period with no obligation to pay. After the trial period, if you decide to keep the software and would like to receive free annual updates, you must register your copy with us for a small fee.
If you bought Outpost Firewall Pro in a box from a store, please follow the instructions on this page at Agnitum's web site to activate your product. After submitting your 25-character activation key, which you can find on the product box, your registration key will be generated.
If you downloaded your copy from Agnitum's web site, to register your version, you need to purchase your registration key. Follow the instructions on this page and you will receive your registration key by e-mail.
How to enter your registration key
1. When you receive your registration key, open the e-mail message that contains it and select all the text between Registration key begins and Registration key ends using your mouse (left-click just before the first character in the first line of the key and while holding down the left mouse button move the mouse just past the last character in the last string of the key, release the mouse button when you have highlighted the entire key as shown in the picture below).
2. Right-click anywhere inside the highlighted text (from step 1) and select Copy from the shortcut menu to copy your registration key to the Clipboard (a generally invisible area of Windows used for Copy and Paste actions).
3. Select Start > Programs > Agnitum > Outpost Firewall Pro and click Enter Registration Key. In the Enter Key window, click the Paste button and your registration key (which you copied to the Clipboard in step 2) will be inserted into the blank box from the Clipboard.
4. Click OK to save your key and close the dialog.
When you buy an Outpost Firewall Pro license, you actually get two licenses:
• A license for Outpost Firewall Pro usage (lifelong);
• A license for free upgrades and support for one year (including the latest Outpost Firewall Pro versions).
In a year you can either buy a renewal license for another year of upgrades and support (Annual Update and Support contract) or simply continue using your last updated version of Outpost Firewall Pro. To purchase a renewal, visit this page. Please note, that you need to specify the same e-mail address you gave when you bought your previous key.
Note:
• Outpost Security Suite Pro and Outpost Firewall Pro are independent products and their registration keys are not interchangeable. It means that Outpost Firewall Pro registration key is not applicable to (Outpost Firewall Pro)? and visa versa. Please, be sure you are entering the correct registration key.
翻译:
注册Outpost Firewall Pro
您可以对Outpost Firewall Pro进行免费评估。在试用期内您被授权评价这套软件且无需附费。试用期结束后如果您决定继续使用该软件并且希望收到免费的一年升级服务,您必须花很少的费用注册您的软件副本。
如果您已经在商店中购买了盒装的Outpost Firewall Pro。请按照Agnitum网页上的[url=http://www.agnitum.com/register.php]该页[/url]的知道激活您的产品。在提交了您在包装盒上找到的25个字符的激活码后,将生成您的注册码。
如果您是从Agnitum网站上下载的软件副本,要注册您的软件副本您需要获取注册码。按照[url=http://www.agnitum.com/purchase/outpost/]该页[/url]的指导您会通过e-mail收到您的注册码。
如何输入注册码
1. 当您收到注册码时打开包含注册码的电子邮件,用鼠标选中位于Registration key begins和Registration key ends 之间的所有内容。(在第一行第一个字符之前单击鼠标左键按住鼠标左键拖动至注册码的最后一个字符,这个时候你会发现您的整个注册码如下图所示呈现高亮状态。
2. 右击高亮部分文本(参看步骤一)的任何一个地方然后从快捷菜单选择复制将您的注册码复制到剪贴板(在windows中用于复制粘贴的通常不可见的区域)。
3. 选择开始菜单>程序>Agnitum> Outpost Firewall Pro and click Enter Registration Key。在Enter Key 窗口点击粘贴按钮您的注册码(您于第2步已经拷贝到剪贴板)将从剪贴板输入空白框处。
4. 点击OK按钮保存您的注册码结束对话。
当您购买Outpost Firewall Pro许可证的时候您实际会得到两种许可证。
• 一份Outpost Firewall Pro使用许可证证(终生有效)
• 一份为期一年的免费升级和支持的许可证(包含最新的Outpost Firewall Pro版本).
一年以后您或者买一份延期的更新和支持的(一年的更新与支持的联系)许可证,或者仅继续使用最后一次升级的Outpost Firewall Pro 版本。购买延期许可证请访问[url=http://www.agnitum.com/purchase/renew.php]该页[/url]。
请注意,您需要指定与您购买先前注册码所使用的相同的邮箱。
注:
• Outpost Security Suite Pro 和 Outpost Firewall Pro 是两款独立的产品它们的注册码是不可替换的。这意味着 Outpost Firewall Pro 的注册码不适用于Outpost Security Suite Pro(此处我认为原文有错,原文是OFP)反之亦然。([b]此处可精简为:Outpost Security Suite Pro 和 Outpost Firewall Pro是两款独立的产品它们的注册码是不可替换的[/b]。[b]revised by clemond[/b])请确信您输入了正确的注册码。
到这里帮助文档中的介绍大块已经全部翻译完了,希望大家把错误都指出来啊,水平有限翻译的不好的地方请见谅。
[[i] 本帖最后由 hopetobe 于 2008-7-17 09:55 编辑 [/i]] 支持楼主,这个任务实在太艰巨了。 支持楼主..OP帮助文档的翻译就靠楼主了[:xi14:] 晕啊,现在幸好是放假,大家一起啊,我会尽量多翻译些! LZ 的精神可嘉, 但是某些词句的翻译可能需要改善, 另外文字排版也需要注意 :)
e.g.
>No special network adapter or modem and no special network configuration settings are needed for the normal operation of the software.
这句话的 "normal operation of the software" 应该为 "日常使用" 或者 "通常情况下", 与操作系统并不相关.
>Outpost Firewall Pro should not be run with any other security software. Running Outpost Firewall Pro with other security products can result in system instability (i.e. crashes) and can cause your system to operate in an insecure mode
某些话可以精简, 不必要逐字翻译. 否则可能拖沓, 例如上面这句话这样翻个人认为会好些 :)
"Outpost 不可与第三方安全软件同时运行. 否则可能造成系统不稳定 (例如崩溃) 并导致..."
> 一份Outpost Firewall Pro使用许可证证
两个 "证"
> Outpost Security Suite Pro 和 Outpost Firewall Pro是两款独立的产品它们的注册码是不可替换的
标点符号, 另外 Pro 后面须有一个空格. 汉字和中文字间一般需空格, 这个要注意 :)
回复 10楼 clemond 的帖子
小C好认真啊,想小C版主学习!!![:01:] 谢谢指正,我已修改了相关内容,排版方面可能没有改全,有些地方翻译的确实比较繁琐但是我怕自己水平不够理解有限就尽量忠于原文了。排版方面我会注意的,以前不是很在意谢谢啦。
outpost firewall pro 帮助文档用户界面和控件基础1
[align=left][size=3][font=微软雅黑]希望大家多多指正啊,呵呵,水平有限啊![/font][/size][size=3][font=微软雅黑]原文:[/font][/size][/align][align=center][size=3][font=微软雅黑][/font][/size]
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[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=3]User Interface and Controls Basics[/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=宋体][size=3]
[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=3]When you launch Outpost Firewall Pro for the first time, its main window is displayed. The main window is your central control panel for the product. Its purpose is to let you monitor network operations of your computer and to modify product settings.[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=3]The main window is very similar to Windows Explorer, so should be familiar to most users making Outpost Firewall Pro quite easy to use.[/size][/font]
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[font=宋体][size=3] +Show me the main window
To display the main window when it is minimized to the system tray:
1.Right-click the firewall's system tray icon.
[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=3]2.Select Show/Hide.
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[font=宋体][size=3]To close the Outpost Firewall Pro main window, click the X in the right-upper corner. Note that this does not shut down the product; the main window is simply minimized and the icon remains in the system tray indicating that it is running and protecting your system.
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[font=宋体][size=3]The main window contains:
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[font=宋体][size=3]+The toolbar
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[font=宋体][size=3]See The Toolbar section for details.
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[font=宋体][size=3]+Left panel
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[font=宋体][size=3]See the Left and Information Panels section for details.
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[font=宋体][size=3]+Information panel
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[font=宋体][size=3]See the Left and Information Panels section for details.
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[font=宋体][size=3]+Status bar
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[font=宋体][size=3]The status bar is at the bottom of the main window. It is used to display the Outpost Firewall Pro's current state.
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[font=宋体][size=3]+Show me the status bar
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翻译:[/align][align=center]
[b][font=微软雅黑]用户界面和控件基础[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑][/font][/b][b][font=微软雅黑]
当你第一次打开 Outpost Firewall Pro 的时候,它的主窗口就显示了。主窗口是您的本产品中央操控台。它的目的是让您监视您计算机的网络运转情况已更改产品设置。
主窗口非常类似于 Windows Explorer, 所以大多数用户感到并不陌生,这使得 Outpost Firewall Pro 变的十分简单易用。[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑]
+显示主窗口(鼠标点击加号显示的是主界面的图片,这里我没有上传截图)
当它最小化在任务栏上时,要显示主窗口请遵循以下步骤:
1. 鼠标右击任务栏上的防火墙图标
2. 选择 显示/隐藏 (Show/Hide)
要关闭 Outpost Firewall Pro 的主窗口,请点击右上角的X。注意这并没有关闭防护墙;主窗口只是最小化了, 它的图标只是保留在任务栏上这说明它正在运行并正在保护着您的操作系统。
主窗口包含:[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑]
-工具栏
查询工具栏部分获得详细信息 (这是文档展开后的部分)[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑]
-左面板
查询左面板和信息面板部分获得详细信息 (这是文档展开后的部分)[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑]
-信息面板
查询左面板和信息面板部分获得详细信息 。(这是文档展开后的部分)[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑]
-状态栏
状态栏在主窗口的底部。它用于显示 Outpost Firewall Pro 的当前状态。[/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=微软雅黑]
-显示状态栏
(点击加号后显示状态栏截图,这里我没有上传截图)
[/font][/b][font=微软雅黑]在word中编辑了一下贴过来就不好看了……
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[[i] 本帖最后由 hopetobe 于 2008-7-17 10:22 编辑 [/i]] 说一个不成熟的想法[:15:]
大家是不是应该先确定翻译的目标
比如到底是简练更好还是忠实于原文更好
因为这个似乎还涉及到OP官方的意见 恩,同意楼上的意见,不过我觉得还是尽量详细些好,考虑到并不是那么多人有那么高的水平呵呵。 不管 Ag 的态度如何, 在翻译中锻炼自己获得收益是最重要的 :D
其实我的英语基础就是靠当初摆弄dos打下的~
回复 14楼 jiangchuan 的帖子
当初翻译 ZoneAlarm CHM 的时候, 我们没有得到 CKPT 官方任何的指导和意见, 当然这也不重要, 只要我们在翻译中能获取收益, 我们的努力能够给他人帮助就够了.卡饭论坛是这样一种地方, 为官方宣传, 为用户说话. 我们没有左右官方的资格, 但官方也没有左右我们的力量.
回复 17楼 clemond 的帖子
经典……[:15:] 呵呵,确实很锻炼人[:17:]
outpost firewall pro 用户界面和空间基础2
又接着翻译了,还真挺锻炼的,这段挺短,下一篇很长翻译中……还是希望大家把错误都指出来啊,谢谢了!原文:
[size=3][font=微软雅黑]The toolbar is close to the top of the main window. To see what each button does, hold your cursor over it for a second. Each button on the toolbar (except the Settings button) is a shortcut to one of the product functions. These buttons are simply an easy and direct path to their functions rather than having to go through several different dialog windows to access the same functions.
+Show me the toolbar
+Show me all the buttons found on the toolbar
Scan for spyware: Starts the spyware system scan.
Settings: Opens : Outpost Firewall Pro's Settings dialog.
Update: Downloads the latest product updates including rules presets and anti-spyware databases.
Help: Opens this help file that you are currently reading.[/font][/size]
[font=微软雅黑][b]译文:[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b] 工具栏靠近主窗口的顶部。想要知道每个按钮是做什么的,请保持指针在该按钮上1秒中的时间不动。工具栏上的每一个按钮(除“设置”按钮)以外,都是本产品某一种功能的快捷方式。这些按钮仅是一些简单而直接的通路,而不是不得不通过多个对话框去行使相同的功能。[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b]+显示工具栏[/b][/font][font=微软雅黑][b](展开后显示了工具栏的截图)[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b]+显示工具栏上的所有按钮[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b]Scan for spyware(扫描间谍软件):启动系统间谍软件扫描。[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b]Settings(设置):打开Outpost Firewall Pro的设置对话框。[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b]Update(更新):下载包括预设规则和反间谍软件数据库的最新产品更新。[/b][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][b]Help(帮助):打开这份您正在阅读的帮助文档。[/b][/font]
[[i] 本帖最后由 hopetobe 于 2008-7-18 12:03 编辑 [/i]]